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(Contains: sexual themes)
The final installment of my France lemon!  Hope you liked :3

Once again, music playlist is in the description (to help you get in the mood~)

When you got home you had two letters from Francis in the mail; they were the ones that he was writing while you were still with him.  They were so sweet in nature that you forgot all about the stupid naked apron.  In the one he described how much love he felt with you laying there asleep next to him; in the next letter he talked about all the other places in France he hoped to take you to see.

You didn't see Francis for another three weeks, until he arrived at your door on a Friday afternoon.  You had been crampy all day because you had your period, and seeing him on your doorstep was a wonderful surprise.

Bonjour, mon amour!” he said and kissed you on both cheeks emphatically before seeking out your lips.

“Francis!” you said and repeated his name between kisses.  You wrapped your arms around him and buried your face in his chest.  You breathed in the familiar scent of his cologne and thought you might start crying.

“Three weeks eez far too long to be apart,” he cooed and ran his fingers through your hair.  “I am at my absolute limit.”

“Francis, I have some bad news.  I have my period.”

“But we can still – you know – right?”

“I'm sorry, but I'm not feeling up to it.  I feel sweaty and bloated...”

“I 'ave 'eard zat eet eez more comfortable for both when you are on your period.”

“You mean you haven't before?”

Francis scratched his cheek.  “Er, well no.”

Maybe we can tomorrow.  If I'm feeling better.”

Francis set about making sure you were comfortable.  He put a romantic movie on the television and then you both cuddled under a blanket while watching it.  You couldn't be happier snuggling up to your French hero while he massaged your crampy lower back and abdomen.

The next morning your cramps had abated.  You could hear the shower from across the hallway while you awoke.  You were so rested after the pain of your cramps that you felt bold.  The bathroom door was unlocked (which didn't surprise you) and you crept into the steamy room while Francis was whistling in the shower.  You silently stripped your clothes, trying not to giggle while the man showered unsuspectingly.

You pulled the back of the shower curtain aside and climbed in.  “Good morning!”

Francis started, and then laughed.  “Good morning eet eez.  I sought you were still sleeping.”

“Nope.”  Your eyes wandered from his face to his chest as a trail of suds slid deliciously over his smooth skin.

“Shall I wash your hair for you?”

You grinned.  “Sure.”  You bumped him playfully out of the way so you could wet your hair in the stream of warm water.  You closed your eyes and brought your hands up so you could fully rinse your hair.  Upon opening your eyes you noticed a light blush dusting Francis' cheeks.  He fumbled with your (favourite scent) scented shampoo bottle and squirted some in his palms.  You turned around so the water was spraying your chest, and Francis began massaging his hands through your (h/l) hair.

“Your 'air eez so beautiful, mon amour,” he murmured from behind you and rubbed his fingers into your scalp.  You could feel his body brush up against yours every so often.

“T-thanks.” You closed your eyes and enjoyed both the spray of water on your skin, and Francis' fingers trailing through your hair.  

“Spin,” he said, and you turned to face him so he could rinse the shampoo.  He took great care to make sure none ran into your eyes.

“What do you still need to wash?” you asked, reaching for his body wash.

“Well, ze truth eez I was almost finished when you came in.  But...I sink I could stay for a bit longer~”

“Is that so?” you asked, acting coy.  “I guess I don't need to wash you, then.  You can go.”  His face looked as if he had been robbed of his toy on Christmas morning.  He moved the curtain and was about to climb out, but you yanked him back in and laughed.  “I was only kidding, silly!  Come here.”

He “honhonhon”ed and closed the curtain while you dampened the washcloth with his body wash.  You motioned for him to turn around so you could wash his back.  You massaged the soap into his skin, while admiring the smooth planes of his back.  You rubbed the washcloth up and down slowly, and Francis relaxed.  He sighed when you moved the washcloth higher and massaged his shoulders, then down his arms.  You breathed in the familiar scent of his body wash.

Mon amour, why are you teasing me?”  He glanced over his shoulder to look at you.

You stuttered and felt at a loss for words.  “What do you mean?”

“You're getting me all worked up, but you don't want us to do anysing while you're on your period.”

“I didn't say we couldn't do anything here.  In the shower.”

It took a second for him to clue in, and then he got a devilish look in his eye.  He brushed past you to rinse the soap off.  “Alright, your turn.”  He took the washcloth from your hands and you turned your back to him.  He rubbed the cloth across your lower back in a wide circle.

When a moment had passed and he hadn't moved from that area you said, “It's not just my lower back that needs to be cleaned, you know.”

“My apologies...”  His hand roamed across your stomach and up across a sensitive breast; they were tender while you were on your period.  His fingers grazed past a nipple and you had to stifle a moan.  Suddenly both his arms were around you, the one with the washcloth trailing up and down your hip while the other fondled a breast.  “How selfish of me to let your back 'ave all ze attention.”

You let a moan escape your lips and reached behind you to rub your hands over any part of him that you could.  He found your hand and pressed it over his member, causing you to jump.  You wrapped your hand around him and stroked him slowly, while the washcloth drifted between your thighs.  You pleasured him as he pleasured you, and soon both your breathing became laboured.  Your legs began to tremble and you were afraid you wouldn't be able to stand for much longer.  Francis' lips found the back of your neck, and the feel of his mouth on your wet skin almost brought you to your limit.  Francis had grown significantly in your hand and you knew he wouldn't be able to take much more.

He growled your name before removing his hand from between your legs and turned you to face him.  He looked like a god with his flushed skin, his muscles tensed, and the water from the shower bouncing off his shoulders.  “I can't wait any longer.”

“Me, neither.”  You wrapped your arms around his neck and dragged his mouth down to yours.  The kiss was wetter than usual, with the water streaming over your faces.  His tongue pressed between your lips and danced with yours as he pressed you against the shower wall.  You gasped as your skin met the cold wall and you arched your back.  Francis groaned, pressing closer, and lifted your leg, keeping his hand firmly placed behind your knee.  “Are you ready?”

You moaned in reply, unable to form coherent words.  You buried your hands in his wet hair and he lifted you slightly so he could ease into you.

“Does eet 'urt?”

“No...silly,” you panted between thrusts.  Your legs felt like jelly so you clasped them around his waist, lest you lose your footing in the shower.  The sound of the running water spurred you on and you met his thrusts.  The only sounds were the slap of skin as your bodies met, the running water, and your and Francis' moaning.

Francis placed his hands on either of your cheeks and stared into your eyes.  He only held that position for a few moments before he groaned and pressed his cheek to yours.  “You feel so good.”

You meant to say that he did, too, but you couldn't form the words when he began thrusting harder.  You placed your palms on the shower wall in an attempt to hold onto something.  The only way you could communicate how you were feeling was through soft gasps and moans, which seemed to spur him further.  You rested your face on his shoulder and breathed in the scent of his skin.  You bit the flesh there and could faintly taste his body wash.

“I'm close – so close,” he grunted and pressed you harder to the wall, grabbing your hand and slipping his fingers through yours.

“Oh, Francis...”

He shivered.  “Say my name again.”

You repeated his name over and over as you neared your peak.  You felt his seed pour into you and the sensation made you quake around him with your own release.  You rested your head on his shoulder and was glad he was strong enough to hold you up, because your legs would never have been able to support you.  You pecked him on the lips and he helped you to your feet.  You noticed he was grinning like a fool.

“Don't think we're making a habit out of this,” you said and patted down your hair.

“A habit out of what?”

“Doing it while I have my period.”

He smirked at you.  “How about doing eet in ze shower?”

You paused for a moment, then gave up in defeat.  “Fine.”  He grinned because he knew you had liked it.

Your relationship progressed in a similar manner for over six months.  You swapped turns going back and forth between London and Paris to visit each other.  The absolute longest range of time that Francis (or you) could bear to be apart was three weeks.  Francis still mailed you a letter every single day, but in addition to letters he made frequent phone calls.

You were talking on the phone with him during a day in April.

“I am sorry, mon amour, but I will 'ave to work zis weekend so I won't be able to come see you.”

“But it's already been over three weeks since we saw each other last,” you said.  You desperately wanted him to come visit.  You wouldn't be able to go to Paris because you were booked to work the upcoming weekend.

You heard him chuckle.  “Do you really miss me zat much?”

“Don't tease me like that, you know I do.”

Je suis desolé.  But, I will be able to go to London next weekend.  Can you bear to be parted for zat long?”

“I suppose so.”  You felt like crying.

“Remember to annoy Arthur for me, okay?  I will see you soon, amour.”

You moped around the house for a few days, then decided you needed to get away from home.  There was a (fave genre) book you'd been meaning to buy, so you headed downtown to your favourite bookstore.  You couldn't believe your eyes when you saw Arthur while walking downtown.

“Afternoon, _____,” he said and smiled.

“Don't you have a conference to get to, Arthur?”

He furrowed his eyebrows.  “No, I don't believe so.”

“Huh, that's funny,” you said, more to yourself.  “Francis said he had a lot of meetings this weekend.”

“Did he, now,” he replied, and you could tell from his tone that he was unimpressed.  “I wonder what that bugger's up to.”  After glancing at you he said hastily, “Well, I'm sure there's a perfectly good reason, love.  Perhaps he has work other than meetings to do this weekend.”  Before you could say another word, he added, “Listen, I'm afraid I'm quite busy today, so I have to run.  I'll give you a bell later.  Cheers.”

You tried not to think too much on your encounter with Arthur, because you knew you'd start to wonder what exactly Francis was doing this weekend.  He said he had to work.  Arthur said there was no work this weekend.

You had effectively pushed those thoughts from your mind when you happened to look through the window of a shop downtown.  You couldn't believe your eyes when you saw Francis – your Francis! – leaning over the counter toward another woman.  You could see her cleavage even from where you were standing on the sidewalk, and Francis was grinning from ear to ear.  The woman – the sales associate from the looks of it – was looking back at him with bedroom eyes.

Francis caught sight of you through the window, and the second you noticed, you ran.  You felt as if you had obtruded on some private matter and didn't want to wait for an explanation.  Or excuse.

That jerk Francis you thought angrily as you ran across the street just as the lights changed to red.  He told me he wouldn't be able to make it here, and now he's bold enough to flirt with another woman behind my back.  No.  Stupid me.  You knew what kind of guy he was from the beginning, but you felt like your heart couldn't take it any longer.  You were sick of all the attention he gave to and received from other women.  You felt angry tears prick your eyes.

You heard your name being shouted and glanced behind you to see Francis outside the shop you'd seen him in.  He would have to wait for the lights to change again before he could catch up with you, so you turned and hurried away.

“_____, wait!”

You heard the sound of screeching tires and quickly turned to look.  Francis was darting across the busy downtown street, trying to dodge cars and buses as horns honked at him.

“Idiot, what are you doing?” you shouted.  He's scared of being in an accident.  You watched in amazement as he jumped out of the way of oncoming traffic and made it safely across the street to stand panting in front of you.  “I can't believe you, Francis.  You said you wouldn't be able to make it to London.”

“I know.”

“And I saw you with that woman.  I wouldn't have thought even you would be as low as to hook up with someone else in my own city.  How many other women do you see behind my back?”

Quoi?  You didn't see which store I was in?”

You voice sounded hysterical even to your ears.  “I wasn't paying attention to what store you were in!  I was more preoccupied with you ogling that woman's chest.  Now answer my question.”

“I swear on my life that I 'ave never cheated on you!”

You felt tears begin to form.  “Then tell me the number of women you have ever slept with.  You always avoid that question and I feel like you're not being honest with me.  I can handle it.”  He sighed and his face reddened.  He mumbled something that you couldn't discern.  “What was that?”

“I said only you, mon amour.  I...was...a virgin our first time.”

“Yeah right, that's impossible.  What about the famous naked apron?  You had to have used that on a lot of women or else it wouldn't be so famous.”

Mon amour, what eez with all zese questions?  I'm telling you ze truth.”

“I just want proof that I'm the only one you care about.”  Tears spilled over your cheeks.  He looked as if he was about to wrap you in his arms, but you took a step back.  Your heart believed him, but your brain didn't.

He dropped his arms to his sides.  “Ze apron eez only famous because I bought eet after we started dating, and I talked to Gil and Toni about it non-stop for ze first two weeks you and I were apart.  Do you 'ave any more questions?”

“What about all the women who throw themselves at you?”

“Now you're just being silly, mon amour.  What am I supposed to do about what ozzer women do?”

“Well you don't have to acknowledge their attention so much.”

“What do you want me to do – ruin my face or somesing so zey won't look at me?  Eez zat what you want?”


“I give ozzer women some attention because I like to make people 'appy.  Zat's just who I am.  But I promise you I don't 'ave any feelings for zem.  Only you.”

“Prove it.”  By now a small crowd had gathered around your argument.  “I need some stability in our relationship, Francis.  Prove it to me now, or don't try coming to see me again.”

You waited for him to say or do something.  He rubbed the back of his neck, looking hurt.  Finally, he sighed.  “Well, okay zen.  I had a more romantic venue picked out, but eef you insist...”  He pulled from his pocket a small black box and opened it before he lowered to one knee, presenting a beautiful ring to you.  “Will you marry me, _____?  We 'ave known each ozzer for over three years, et je suis tombé en amour avec toi.  I feel like I've know you my whole life.  We are perfect togezzer...we fit perfectly togezzer.  My life 'as never, and could never be, ze same after I met you.  I promise to spend ze rest of my life trying to make you 'appy.  You are ze only one I love.  I want to be only yours, and for you to be only mine.  Ainsi, veux-tu m'épouser?”

It was all the proof you needed.  You began sobbing and choked out a yes.  Francis grinned and placed the engagement ring on your finger with a shaky hand.  Then he pulled you into a tight hug, and the crowd around you began clapping and whistling.

He kissed you on the forehead then whispered in your ear, “I was not sure you would say yes.  When you saw me in ze jewellry store and ran I sought eet was because you wouldn't want to marry me.”

“Don't be silly, Francis,” you said.  “I love you, you fool.”  

“I told you I couldn't come to London because I wanted zis to be a surprise.  I 'ope you don't mind, but I have ze wedding rings already.  Zey are part of a set with ze engagement rings.  Zese ones I just bought 'ere in London, and ze ozzers I bought in Paris.  Zat way, when we are married, we will have joined both our cities togezzer.”

“That's beautiful, Francis.”  You faced him.  “Is it true what you said?  Our first time...”

“Eet eez all true.  Eet was just a façade zat Gil, Toni, and I created when I was young, to make eet seem like I 'ad been with lots of women.”

You facepalmed.  “Francis...a virgin.  I can't believe it.”

Oui, but you cured me of zat, didn't you?”  He wriggled his eyebrows at you and you blushed profusely.  It made way too much sense, now.  The fact that he hadn't been with a woman on her period before.  The way he had been so nervous your first time.  “Now, come 'ere, amour.”

His hands cupped your face and then his lips covered yours in a tender kiss that brought tears to your eyes.  The crowd clapped again and cheered.  Then the kiss suddenly turned heated, and Francis backed you up against a nearby wall, running his hands up and down your body.  The crowd silently and quickly dispersed.

“Francis...I love you,” you said between kisses.  “I'm sorry I overreacted.”  

Je t'aime, aussi.”

“Don't you ever run across traffic like that again.  Do you hear me?”

He gazed down at you lovingly.  “Zen don't run away from me like zat ever again, or else I'll 'ave to.”

You pecked him on the lips.  “I think you have some explaining to do with Arthur.  He thought you were cheating on me this weekend, too.”

“Arthur knew of my intentions from ze start.”

“The start?”

He placed his hands on your cheeks and stared into your eyes.  “I always planned on marrying you.  I wanted to from ze beginning.”

You blushed and kissed him.  Your voice dropped to a whisper.  “What do you say we go back to my place and have another – power outage?  No television, no lights, no phone...just me and you.”

Honhonhon I like ze sound of zat.”  He held your hand as you both left – the only hand he would hold for the rest of his life.


bonjour = hello/good morning
mon amour = my love
je suis desolé = I'm sorry
amour = love
give you a bell (British) = phone
quoi = what
et je suis tombé en amour avec toi = and I have fallen in love with you
ainsi = so
ainsi veux-tu m'epouser = (you can probably figure this one out)
façade = show/appearance/illusion
je t'aime aussi = I love you, too
The final installment of my France lemon! Thank you for reading :3

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]


Tell Me You Love Me - Carol Medina (fun): [link]
The Red Strokes - Garth Brooks (slow + romantic): [link]
Can't Keep My Hands Off You - Simple Plan (fun + reminds me of France): [link]
Mirrors (Dirty Version) - Natalia Kills (sexy sexy): [link]
Kiss Me - Sixepence None the Richer (cute + romantic): [link]
First Time - Lifehouse (romantic): [link]
By Now - Marianas Trench (angsty + Josh Ramsay is sexy): [link]
It's All Coming Back to Me Now - Celine Dion (French + romantic): [link]
Be My Lover - La Bouche (fun): [link]
Can't Fight the Moonlight - LaAnn Rimes (fun + sexy): [link]
All My Loving - Jim Sturgess (sexy voice): [link]
That's the Truth - Paul Brandt (fun + romantic + sexy voice + reminds me of France and Reader): [link]
Addicted - Kelly Clarkson (sexy + reminds me of Reader-chan): [link]
All Around Me - Flyleaf (I'm not actually sure why I listened to this one lol): [link]
You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This - Toby Keith (romantic + reminds me of France and Reader): [link]
Je Sais Pas - Celine Dion (French + sexy): [link]
Open Arms - Journey (slow + romantic): [link]
Hit Me Up - Danny Fernandes/Josh Ramsay/Belly (sexy): [link]
Why Don't We Just Dance - Josh Turner (fun + sexy sexy man + reminds me of France): [link]
No Promises - Bryan Rice (slow and romantic): [link]
The Power of Love - Celine Dion (classic + romantic + French): [link]
My Heart Has a History - Paul Brandt (romantic + sexy voice + reminds me of France?): [link]
Your Man - Josh Turner (sexy + slow + romantic + sexy sexy man): [link]
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Genuinus Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  New member Hobbyist
This is really nice. Hope more great fanfics are created for Francey-pants ♥
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
Thanks :)
Vilabeth Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Was i the only one who thought then they saw the word "crampy" and thought HOLY FUDGE IM PREGNANT!!! Then I saw pirouette and giggled.

also INLOVE WITH THIS STORY! YOU DESERVE A COOKIE!!! -makes it rain cookies-
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basketcase789 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Thanks :D America (Eating Hamburger) [V1] 
Vilabeth Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
My iPad hates me and I just realised the mistake I made lol. Also awesome pic 
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*Curls into a ball and dies* La dies 
I love this. Crying Death the Kid Emote 
Anna-Keeler Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student General Artist
*quietly dies of the feels*
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
Don't die! Have a cookie :cookie: 
KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
This four part story of yours, This is of my top 3 favorite fanfics i have ever read. (My husband is Germany but I like to "explore") i just want you to know that i gave my whole heart into that favorites button for these. I am really, speechless. All I can say is Beautiful, and Thank you. (Being French, I can really feel the emotion and 'the feels' in all lf this)
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
Thanks, I'm glad :D I worked really hard on this story :) APH France: Neko!France  
KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Of course! Keep up the great work!!
Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Holy fuck this is amazing you truly have an amazong talent and lmao the lemon parts were really amazing too PLEASE DO ANOTHER THING KINDA LIKE THIS PLZZZZZ
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Thanks! I'm sure I'll post more stories like this one in the future :)
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La la la la OMG,:happybounce:   this is one of the best stories I have ever read!!!Love Love Love    I absolutely LOVED this!!!!!!!Love Heart Love Heart  THIS has totally made my day!!!!!Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] Markiplier, Cat Lick Icon :'3 Cutie In-Love - NaNoEmo14 Day 14  THANK YOU soooo much for writing such a FABULOUS AUWS-MAZING storyKawaii Eyes Icon Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] Chiyo Fangirling Icon L being shexy~ , you're the ABSOLUTE best!!!!!Natlaaa :OliveU: - NaNoEmo    FRANCISMarkiplier, Cat Lick Icon :'3 Heart2Heart -Free 2 Use Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] La la la la :happybounce: Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart :squee: Boogie! w00t! Thumbs Up Smooooch! Tight Hug 
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
Wow thanks haha I'm glad you liked it Let me hug you! 
SweetPea215 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Amazing *Q* this is a wonderful Job !!! Thank you for writing this !!
T3r3z1P Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
I think you did a wonderfully amazing job with this story... After the first part I was starting to doubt the rest would end happily and well, but after reading the second part, my doubts started to fade and I continued reading... I'm really glad I did because I absolutely love the way it progressed and the way the words just fit so well together, along with the plot and details... Though to be honest, this was my favorite part... I broke down in tears when the reader noticed Francis in the shop with the lady at the counter, and thought it might end with me sobbing in my emo corner while I try to piece my feels together... After I finished reading, I was sobbing, but with a smile on my face... It was beautifully pieced together and with such depth, I felt like I was really living in this story... Thank you for taking the time to write this amazing story, it made my day...
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Thanks so much :D I'm glad you enjoyed it because I put a lot of work into it :') Let me hug you! 
T3r3z1P Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
You're welcome... Keep up the good work
Celestmorning Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
I rate this 100000000000000000000000000000000000 on the fluffiness meter!!!!!!
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Yay!!! EXO : Dancing Unicorn 
13th-Program Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Student General Artist
MY!MY!MYYYY!!! XD I just love this story you know? xD this really made my day ;)
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
Haha I'm glad :)
Silenced-Nocturne Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just perfect~ One of the sweetest romances I've ever read, and some of the hottest France lemons I've ever had the pleasure of viewing.
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
haha thanks :) 
Silenced-Nocturne Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just perfect~ One of the sweetest romances I've ever read, and some of the hottest France lemons I've ever had the pleasure of viewing.
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Wait, what? Since when have we English people said "Give you a bell" XD That sounds like someone sucks at giving presents XD
AlysTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've hated France until now.
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Glad you changed your mind lol
SpartanAmethyst Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
I'm dead. You just put me in the hospital. 
This is by far my favorite France x reader, wonderful job! <3
xXMusic-MuseXx Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL. I think you just made me fall for Francis (just a little~). :iconloveloveplz:
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Thanks :) And France is pretty awesome ;)
InsanityPop Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Times I wanted to burst out laughing, so I smashed my face in a pillow...[It is 4 in the AM] Others my face was redder than Antonio's tomatoes, so I slapped water on my face... And also I had DAWWWWW DAS SO CUTE moments, so I smashed my face into my Chihuahua. And I rarely have O MAH LAWDY tummy feelings towards lemons anymore... I had that plus O SHIT O SHIT ~Runs in circles then falls on my bed with a derp face~ moment. <3> SO DETAILED GIMME KISSIES. Seriously instead of reading this with pretzels I should have some Hershey Kisses. >:I
AndreaTheChinchilla Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually I don't read lemons but I have this one a try because oh gersh Francis<3 this story is amazing you're a very talented writer
Just wow!
He was my favorite character
But you just made me love him more :iconblushplz:
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Thank you :3
obsessedteen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
THIS IS THE BEST FRANCE FANFIC EVER! I constantly go back and read this. You, my friend, are a fantastic writer. Everything fits perfectly. Aaahh, I get to marry Francis :3 !!!!!!!!
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Thanks :) I'm glad you like it
obsessedteen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
I loved it! :)
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
:D :D
Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Twenty million out of ten!!!!!!!!!!
You madame have just earned yourself a watch.
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Yay :D
Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Added to my devWatch! 
Craycraygirl Featured By Owner Edited Jul 22, 2014
OMG I thought of the song 'Chasing Pavements by Adele' when France proposed to reader-chan. I love it!! 10000000000000000000 out of 10
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Craycraygirl Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
I also like how you take it slow and make the reader REALLY savor the moment a want more! OMG totally going to add a fav!
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
;D Thanks
NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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